I walked through a forest to a log cabin.
I watched Jake edge his way through a dark & gloomy forest. Our feet crunched on the pebble-stone path. Long weeds grew through the pebbles. The dirt was as slippery as ice, but it was the color of clay. On both sides of the path there were baby-dragon skulls stabbed onto spikes! We kept walking until we came to a stone-brick clearing that was struck by moonlight. It was mossy with splatters of dried blood. I had a sick feeling in my stomach. Jake continued walking. The sharp & leaf-less trees curved around a spooky log cabin. Soon he bumped his head into the door of the cabin. It was made of old birch wood with an oak door. There was a dark window on each side of the cabin. There was a sign on the door saying “Danger, keep out!!” I asked Jake if we had to go inside, Jake did not reply. The oak door slowly opened with a clunk. As soon as we shifted into the cabin, the door shut closed & locked. We were trapped inside!!
It was filled with excitement All the way through the story,What I thought you should add is how they could maybe try to get out or show the person/people that trapped them!
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